Hanging out with (Virtually) all you awesome folk who write, want to write, are not writers but are skilled beta (or alpha! If so, you have my deepest condolences for reading thypos and gramm..grammer..grammor…errors. But a big thank you for enduring such written horrors to see past them into the story.) readers.
Today I have run across using deep first or third person points of view. In studying the Deep POV, this is something I have used without knowing the label of it, I just felt it was something that was my quirk and have strove to go back to the older style.
This morning, in a chat with an author, she explained the Deep POV should be used.
The complaint stemmed from her swapping tenses in the same paragraph. Meh, I do that too, that is where the glory of being a Beta Reader shines. (Alpha reader should be the writer, no? Or the adult children, mother, uncle, brother, someone who it won’t be TOO embarrassing to know you write after taking a hit off their bong)
The thoughts of using a Deep point of view, where you get rid of the “He said” “She Thought” “They saw” sort of leading you to know what goes on in the heads of our protagonist or antagonist… or even the odd tangent character that you might write about that has no bearing on the story and goes away within a few paragraphs.
Like the lead-in person that dies while opening Dracula’s coffin in the archeology dig when no one is looking.
So to use the fancy link skills. I looked this up quick like.
For you writers, beta readers, other awesome blossoms that dream of writing. Write me something!
The Deep POV is a strong and useful tool that has evolved in the last few decades, so I will include the link. It is a good read.
The way I look at it, as writers we strive to make a better, more passionate soul for our characters.